Writing Exercise - Britney Britney

So we were told to write an 50 word story in class . Being the airhead that i am , i wrote this . Fairly interesting exercise , other than the fact my prof did not have much to comment , or didnt know how to comment on such a air-headed piece.

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Boo Britney Spears – Hourglass

Is this the end of Britney’s career ?

Opening for the MTV’s Video Music Awards, Britney did not live up to the media’s expectations.

“Wow. This is not good.' All the lip-syncing and everything,” commented rapper Kayne West, clearly shocked.

Definitely the worst performances of her career.

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Bye Britney – Nut graph

“I thought this would be her big comeback, but I was very disappointed” said Linda , a huge fan.

Many were shocked at her performance at the recent Video Music Awards. Critics called the performance “weak and uncoordinated”

“I guess Britney has really lost it” mused Linda.




On a side note . Britney's performance was truly tragic .